"This has to be a dream," Fizz thought vividly. He walked toward a huge bone in the area and attempted to touch it with his hand, but the second he did, it melted into warm fizzy soda. It didn't melt into the "Fizzy" drink that Fizz loved so much, but just a blue soda that Fizz didn't know the name of.
Just before he could touch another bone, he heard his "real" name be called from the abyss...
"Finn"
Turning around swiftly, Fizz saw a giant waterfall, and in front sat a small golden bubbly horned creature. Its childlike body was almost wholly made of unending circulating orange soda. Its eyes and mouth glowed white through the splashes of its own body.
"Im the Bubble Ghost," it smiled- "some called me the Soda Demon or Soda Master, but all I am really is a ghost."
It sounded childlike and mature at the same time.
"where am I"- Fizz asked, interested.
"This is our Spirit World; this is where our power is strongest."
Fizz nodded, "Who are you?"
Looking slightly annoyed, the creature responded, "I am your ghost.", "You came so close to death that your soul pushed me out without thinking about whether you would survive or not, so I'm trapped with you in the land of the living."
Fizz scratched his head as he tilted it to the side. "you said you were the Bubble. Ghost, though, and that people know you as the Soda Demon.", "How would they know of you if you were recently created."
The demon giggled, "When a ghost dies, it finds a new soul; I could only bond with a soul that has common traits as me, such as liking soda.", "Usually, when the host of a ghost dies, the host gets trapped into the Spirt world until the ghost dies, and then they both are reborn."
Fizz started walking toward the creature. "So that means this isn't a dream," he thought...
Fizz finally reached the creature and sat right in front of it, "You're made of orange soda," "Do you- have a preference for soda?"
The creature giggled "Fizzy would honestly be my first pick"...
Fizz looked at the creature and smiled "No wonder my body accepted you, your perfect," Fizz said, reaching his hand out towards the creature, "Im Finn, wanna be friends"...
The creature was startled, "I-" he stopped himself and started to cry out tears that flew down the creature's face of soda as if it was a solid surface.
"Did I say something wrong"- Fizz said, concerned-
"No," the creature spoke, wiping its tears off its face, "I- I would love to be your friend".
After a near-death experience, certain people acquire the ability to transform into a variety of monsters, From a can of soda on top of a supernaturally strong body- to a
300-meter skeleton from the waist up capable of mass destruction- This is the story of Fizz, Daniel, and Sasha as they struggle to find meaning in their destructive nature.
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... (this is drafting for an entire novel; in other words, this is to receive feedback before i basically redo this but 10x better"
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