"You didn't seem very emotional when I first met you." fizz pointed out...
The creature stood up and nodded. "Yeah, usually people freak out or immediately ask me to make deals with them for power." he watched Fizz stand up, "Nobodys ever just asked to be my friend before."
Fizz looked at the ghost, confused, "How does making deals increase the hosts' power?"...
The creature spoke, "Usually, ghosts don't have a kind host, so the ghost doesn't share any extra ghost powers with them; the limited power ghosts usually give people allows them to become mazokus and transform into the manifestation of one's desire or hatred" the demon kid smiled "all my owners have been villains so far, and they all made huge deals with me to wreck chaos and destroy innocent people... you seem to be kinder however."
Fizz smiled. "So you're the one who gives me my power?"
The creature nodded towards Fizz.
"Could you teach me how to use them?" Fizz asked excitedly
The ghost started to get excited... "When you get back to the real world, if you call me by my name, ill wake up and be able to communicate with you... I could guide you on how to use your powers!"
Fizz moved toward the creature, "what's your name?" he asked politely...
The creature answered, "Im the Bubble Ghost, but my buddies just call me Bubbel!"
Suddenly Bubbel looked sad, "looks like your time in the Spirit World is up."
"Before you leave, I'd like to give you a deal, free of charge.",
Fizz moved toward Bubbel. "So, how do I get the deal?"
Bubbel suddenly lunged forward and lightly kissed Fizz's Forehead.
"Deals on your head will boost your control over your powers."
Fizz was more concerned that a ghost had just kissed him on the forehead.
Bubbel slowly started to grow in height until he was about the same height as Fizz...
Lighty blushing, Fizz asked why the ghost grew up so suddenly.
"Ghosts just- do that when they make a deal; I didn't make you uncomfortable, right" Bubbel grinned.
"Nope," Fizz lied, "how do I get out of here, though?"
Bubbel frowned a bit, "leaving already?", "Well, I guess I should have expected you to want to leave eventually; all you have to say is "awaken" really loud"...
Fizz smiled. "I'll call you the second I wake up," "I guess ill see you later?"
Bubbel smiled. "Seeya later"
"AWAKEN!"
Fizz disappeared into a cloud of bubbles.
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"Now that the host is gone, let me out," a childlike voice echoed from the waterfall.
"I still don't know what you're doing here," Bubbel said seriously.
"I have a name, you know; how hard is it to say Nine?" shouted Nine, "I already told you, Im another ghost just like you, Im the Nine Tails Ghost!"
"Last time I checked, Sasha had the Nine Tails ghost."
"I don't know who Sasha is; I- I already told you I was quite literally born yesterday, Bubbel!"
Bubbel grunted. "You just being here is making Finn "too" strong too fast; he could hurt himself just from your regular power output regardless of deals., I can't risk that right now!"
Bubbel sat back down in front of the waterfall... "Come on Bubbel, your just as lonely out there as i am in here and you know it-" Nine whined...
Bubbel made a tiny window in the waterfall- "This should make us less lonely, right" Bubbel said grinning, tears slowly swelling in his eyes from attempting to act heartless for an extended duration.
After a near-death experience, certain people acquire the ability to transform into a variety of monsters, From a can of soda on top of a supernaturally strong body- to a
300-meter skeleton from the waist up capable of mass destruction- This is the story of Fizz, Daniel, and Sasha as they struggle to find meaning in their destructive nature.
Feel free to discuss what you think about the story so far and what i could do better as a writer!
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... (this is drafting for an entire novel; in other words, this is to receive feedback before i basically redo this but 10x better"
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