Fizz woke up on a bus with Daniel, who didn't want him on the expedition. Bubbel appeared and gave Fizz the power to control soda. They arrived at a building in the desert, and Daniel put Fizz back to sleep before admitting he was planning on going on his mission alone.
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Stepping out of the dusty bus, Daniel scanned the area as he held Fizz holstered on his back...
There was a massive hole in the building- it appeared to be in the process of being repaired, but after this land became a wasteland, construction was halted despite this being the only standing building in the area!
"Slushi and I are gonna flip around to the back and scan the area for alternate entrances," Mr. J said as he nudged his beanie a bit to the side while standing on top of a stone wall that circles the building, "You sure you can handle this alone?"
Daniel nodded, "I should be able to handle this effortlessly."
Mr. J shook his head, "I mean, are you sure you can handle him." he pointed at Fizz...
Daniel scratched his curly black hair and sighed, "I-"
"You've been acting very strange since the revival of Fizz.", Mr. J called out. "Look, if you can beat someone, just call for me, and ill send a clone so you can escape."
"N-no, ill be fine," Daniel smiled. "Don't worry about us!"
Mr. J started to say something but was cut off by Slushie calling for him to hurry up. Mr. J nodded at Daniel to continue forward, then Mr. J seemingly disappeared into the wind...
"That Boy"- Someone called out from above the building in a deep dark cocky voice, "He looks familiar!". The person jumped down from the building and landed with a powerful slam. Dust and dirt blew in all directions.
Once the smoke dissipated, Daniel's vision cleared, and he observed what seemed to be a towering figure with a masculine build, an unrealistically muscular physique, and a head that had been replaced with a shiny mug filled with coffee.
After a near-death experience, certain people acquire the ability to transform into a variety of monsters, From a can of soda on top of a supernaturally strong body- to a
300-meter skeleton from the waist up capable of mass destruction- This is the story of Fizz, Daniel, and Sasha as they struggle to find meaning in their destructive nature.
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... (this is drafting for an entire novel; in other words, this is to receive feedback before i basically redo this but 10x better"
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