Daniel and his friends arrived at a deserted building under construction. They searched for alternate entrances while Daniel stayed behind with Fizz. A muscular figure with a coffee mug head appeared and questioned Daniel's presence claiming to recognize Fizz...
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"You wouldn't happen to be looking for a girl with black hair, right" he chuckled as he spun out a fully loaded gun, "If so, I would turn this field trip around this instance..."
Daniel smirked. "A mazoku using a gun?" he thought, "he must not be good at combat in close quarters."
Daniel blinked, but the second he opened his eyes, he was face to face with the Coffee Man, "hey," he called out, "Im right here," he laughed.
Startled, Daniel hopped back and threw Fizz's unconscious body away from himself. A boney hand grew out of the ground and caught Fizz before caging up his body with its fingers...
"he's fast," Daniel thought...
The Coffee Man shot his gun, but right before the bullet hit Daniel's head, his skin turned into bone, causing the object to bounce off.
"Knees," Daniel shouted towards the coffee man loudly.
The Coffee man fell to his knees, confused; it was as if another force was pulling on his kneecaps.
The coffee man started to stand up against the additional force applied to him slowly and even started to hop off the ground and stretch, then the man began to dash towards Daniel.
Daniel started to panic! He hurried to name all the bones he could think of... "Shins, Fingers, Crainum, Ribcage," but the man only got faster.
He had gotten too close for Daniel to avoid his next attack; he had to play defensively...
"BONE WALL" he shouted as a massive wall of random human bones erupted from the ground... This didn't stop the coffee man as he almost effortlessly ran through the wall, dashed straight past Daniel, and headed toward Fizz at an inhuman speed.
"FIZZ" Daniel yelled, noticing the coffee man's trajectory. Recklessly Daniel quickly puts in his earplugs and breaks his left thumb; upon hearing the faint sound of his bones cracking, an unfathomable wall of skeleton bodies erupted from the ground and attempted to reach and grab everything in their path, eventually catching up to The Coffee Man and holding his airborne body before suddenly solidifying into stone.
"Fascinating," the coffee man laughed. "You know a lot of Impressive spells," he complimented. "All mazokus need fuel to use their mazoku powers effectively, and you seem to get that power from hearing bones break, even if it was just a small break."
Daniel asked sternly. "How does telling me that information help you now," Daniel asked.
"it doesn't," laughed the coffee man who was now suddenly behind Daniel, his hand tightly gripping Daniel's head...
"This was my mazoku spell, Adrenaline Rush," he chuckled. "Sometimes I move so fast time seems to stop."
Before Daniel could jump away again, The Coffee Man slammed his head straight into the ground...
"You were strong, too; you underestimated my physical abilities and gave your friend a lousy defense," he frowned. "I won't kill you, though, since everyone I kill finds a way to return from the dead.
The coffee man turned around and laughed, "Im talking to you. Did you have a nice nap?"
"Leave him alone!" Fizz called out from in front of the coffee man, utterly deaf to the coffee man's words...
"LEAVE HIM ALONE NOW!" he shouted as giant floating bubbles of soda with insane acidity rose from the ground and surrounded the area...
"Bubbel-" Fizz thought, "tell me how to beat this thing."
After a near-death experience, certain people acquire the ability to transform into a variety of monsters, From a can of soda on top of a supernaturally strong body- to a
300-meter skeleton from the waist up capable of mass destruction- This is the story of Fizz, Daniel, and Sasha as they struggle to find meaning in their destructive nature.
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... (this is drafting for an entire novel; in other words, this is to receive feedback before i basically redo this but 10x better"
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