The coffee man chuckled; he couldn't care less about the orange bubbles floating all around him, It would be impossible for them to hit him...
"BUBBEL", Fizz thought VERY loudly, "how do I beat this man"
"With only one deal, I doubt you'll be able to win this fight", Bubbel sighed "He is simply too fast"...
Fizz started to panic "How do we escape from someone that fast!"
Bubbel spoke "There is one more option... If you could just hold out for just a little while..."
Fizz looked at his surroundings, the bubbles he made were made of a very small amount of soda, so they could move fast, but the most they could do it give him a burn he could easily brush off...
Suddenly while Fizz was lost in thought, the coffee man had already closed the distance between him.
He didn't say anything he just stared...]
"Bubbel told me to hold him off for only a while, but holding off this monster is nigh impossible"
----------------- Location: Fizz's spirit world.
"I'll let you out," Bubbel said sternly, "But you have to give our host your mazoku powers",
A voice echoed out from the waterfall, "There's nothing i can do"
Bubbel responded, "W-why not"....-
The voice grunted, "My power only activates in response to strong emotions, like hate, joy, and sadness, and Fizz isn't feeling any of that right now"
"WHY NOT" Bubbel cried
The voice continued, "Fizz seems to hold off his hate until he knows why the person is doing something, and right now, all he has to go off of is 2 minutes of drowsy combat"
------------- Location: Cartel outer area
The coffee man stared at Fizz in confusion, "it's like he doesn't want to even hit me" the man thought, "or maybe he's too scared to act."
"Fizz, don't you hate this man", Bubbel asked Fizz...
"No, he could have hit Daniel out of self-defense"
"Fizz, hell no, he just slammed him into the ground head first," Bubbel pointed out in confusion,
The ghost pondered, "Is Fizz under a spell of some sort" "A sedation spell?"
The Coffee man picked up Fizz by his head. "It's like your sleeping but filled with adrenaline," he spoke curiously... "You must be that same boy back when i was just a normal human; what was your name... hmm"
"Wasn't your name Fizz?"
With a bright explosion of dust and stones, the Coffee Man flew back through the entrance of the cartel, breaking the door completely. A glowing eye glew in the dust, and a new emotion consumed Fizz, one of intense and unrelenting hatred. Two tails made of sparkling soda emerged from behind him, while fox ears made of bubbles appeared atop his head. Fizz's head was filled with one goal, and anyone who got in his way would be destroyed...
"What a familiar voice", Fizz whispered in a fit of pure rage.
After a near-death experience, certain people acquire the ability to transform into a variety of monsters, From a can of soda on top of a supernaturally strong body- to a
300-meter skeleton from the waist up capable of mass destruction- This is the story of Fizz, Daniel, and Sasha as they struggle to find meaning in their destructive nature.
Feel free to discuss what you think about the story so far and what i could do better as a writer!
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... (this is drafting for an entire novel; in other words, this is to receive feedback before i basically redo this but 10x better"
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