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Sep 24, 2024
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He had been trying not to give her advice. --> add line after
which is why she hadn't been a surprise --> which was why she hadn't been surprised
out to her. --> add line after
teased reaching into the small bag she --> teased, reaching into the small bag she had
palm sized --> palm-sized
Ceilsea's first --> remove extra space
even though he must have known that from Iscano, --> change final comma to period
I love the image of them being outfitted in a xylophone with a sword and ocarina.
Oh politics. But I thought Ceilsea answered all the questions at the end really well.
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