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Before Man Mistakes

1 - 2 My neighbor Liam

1 - 2 My neighbor Liam

Dec 09, 2024

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*Double-sense plot is born*

#sad #real_love #drama #romantic

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Justin Carbunkle
Justin Carbunkle

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Paul’s sprinting poses are funny.

The distorted text in the anxiety attack panels work. Presenting then as whole paragraphs, I ended up glancing over them than taking in Paul’s anxiety. I suggest playing with it more to convey his anxiety. Maybe break the text up into multiple speech bubbles, or skew the text so it isn’t just going up to down, or maybe have the text overlapping, ect.

Some of Pauls inner monologue text feels unnecessary, though that might be part of this genres writing.

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Paul, a humble, cute, catholic teenager that suffers a generalized anxiety disorder does his best to hide deeper imperfections. He´s the top student, and that´s why he is hated by his classmates. His twin brother, Chris, a popular, aggressive teenager that suffers an emotional instability disorder "hates" Paul. Even though, Paul loves his brother Chris and tries to keep him safe. As time passes, Chris has other feelings to Paul, but his feelings are not so innocent...
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1 - 2 My neighbor Liam

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