As she continued reading the novel, her eyes narrowed in anger. Before she could even finish reading the novel, she threw it away and said, "What rubbish is this? Who writes such novels?"
Seeing Neha getting angry, a smile came on Kiya's face. Neha was reacting exactly the way she wanted. But she very quickly removed that smile from her face and replaced it with a sad expression and said, "That is why I want to go into this novel. Can you help me in this?"
Neha did not see Kiya's expressions so she did not know what was going on in Kiya's heart. She said to Kiya, "But I don't know how to go about in a novel?"
Hearing Neha's answer, Kiya said, "I have read in a book about how to go to another world. But that requires more magic, which you already have. That's why I have come to ask your help in this matter!"
Neha did not understand what Kya said. She asked, "I am not able to understand what you are saying at all! First of all, how will you go to the novel with my help? And let's assume that you go to the novel, then how will you come back from there?"
Hearing Neha's question, Kiya replied, "This is why I am asking for your help! Please help me go to the novel right now. If this experiment is successful, then I will come back here with the help of my magic. If I use all my magic on this experiment right now, then after going to the novel, I will never be able to come back from there. If you help me now, then you can stay here and bring your magic back to this level! But if I try to do this experiment in your place, then it is possible that I might lose my life!"
Has potential, the writing could use a sense of place and clarity. What's the room like, what's the atmosphere, what's anything like and so on. And try not to repeat too much info, like mentioning that it was a novel twice in quick succession. We know she's reading a novel, she herself doesn't need to mention it
Neha was helping her friend to make a portal to enter a novel but her friend betrayed her and pushed Neha into the portal instead of herself. However, due to the tussle between them, half of the name of the novel got erased from Neha. Due to which, instead of reaching the novel she was supposed to, she reached some other novel and fell straight into the lap of the Feather King.
The Feather King, Revan, was a Cruel King and would kill anyone for his own benefit. Now that Neha has gone and fallen in his lap, how will he treat her? Will neha be able to escape from the Feather King? After all why did her own friend betray Neha?
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