Shadow duel
Aug 18, 2025
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Very nice action! Classic anime stuff.
Sometimes I found it a bit confusing who is speaking; such as the section where it seems Kaito both says yes and no to being a spirit bearer. Like, “the reply is curt” with a yes and then “Kaito replies” with a no. Then I wonder whose reply the first one was?
I think it’s important to do a bit more proofreading and editing. This definitely has potential but I think it needs more polish to attract longtime readers.
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