Verily At First... (Part 2)
Sep 21, 2025
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The other half of the first chapter.
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Great continuation! So the mystery woman escaped with him too? 🫣 He is really lucky to get a functioning ship in the dumpster! There are a few grammar mistakes I saw again. There are also some parts mentioned in brackets which you can include in the original sentence instead. But good work!
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