Got No Ticket To Ride (Part 3)
Oct 13, 2025
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Forge's presence has shaken some things up in the Police Department...
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I think this chapter borders on headhopping (abrupt change in Point of View without making it explicit). I had to re-read the chapter because I got confused by the swap on PoV in the middle of the chapter. It feels more like a TV script where theres a scene change, but it doesn't carry well on text.
That's my feedback!
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