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Love in the Quiet City

Before Closing (part 2)

Before Closing (part 2)

Nov 09, 2025

The bell above the door stopped moving, but the faint vibration still lingered in the air.  
He stood there for a while, watching the space she had left behind—the faint impression of her presence still clinging to the air between the stools.  
It wasn’t about her, not yet.  
It was about how silence always arrived differently after someone left.

The rain outside came back, slow and deliberate, tapping on the awning with the patience of someone who had nowhere else to be.  
He turned down the music a little.  
The saxophone became softer, a ghost playing to itself in the corner.

He began collecting the empty glasses.  
Her cup was still warm when he picked it up.  
The ring it had left on the counter was perfect—a small, private eclipse.  
He placed a clean towel over it and lifted it again, as though checking if the mark wanted to stay.

It did.

The sound of running water filled the back sink.  
He washed the glass carefully, stacking it among the others.  
The repetition was almost calming: wash, rinse, dry, shelf.  
Each action returned the world to order, one object at a time.

The door to the storage room creaked open.  
His barback, a young man in a gray hoodie, emerged carrying a crate of empty bottles.  
The light behind him spilled out, square and cold.

“You want me to start the mop?” the barback asked.

“Finish the bottles first.”

“Sure thing.”

The light vanished as the door swung shut.  
He reached for a bottle of still water, drank half, and set it beside the register.  
The rain’s rhythm outside synced with the hum of the refrigerator.  
It made the whole room feel like a song with no beginning.

The two men from earlier got up from their table, putting on their coats.  
One of them waved toward the counter.

“All good?”

“Yeah,” he said. “You’re clear.”

“Nice place.”

“Good night.”

The bell gave a small, tired ring as they stepped into the rain.  
The door shut behind them with a sigh.

He wiped the table they had left—a small trace of salt, a wedge of lime, water rings overlapping like memories.  
The woman who’d been sitting by the window was gone, too.  
Only her faint perfume remained, caught between smoke and citrus.

He looked toward the window.  
Outside, the street was empty, save for the occasional cab slicing through puddles.  
Neon from the pawnshop sign next door blinked against the wet glass, red bleeding into blue.

The bar felt larger now.  
Emptiness had a way of stretching walls.

He poured himself a small whiskey, just enough to taste the night.  
The first sip was cold; the second tasted like quiet resolve.  
He didn’t drink to forget—he drank to remember less sharply.

The back room door opened again.  
The barback reappeared, shoulders damp, carrying another crate.

“You want me to switch the sign off?”

“Yeah. Outside too.”

The younger man nodded and went out through the side door.  
The neon sign flickered, then died, leaving only the soft gold of the interior lights.  
Outside, the rain absorbed everything—the sound, the color, the movement.

He looked at the small screen under the counter.  
A message from a supplier blinked: *Delivery confirmed, 8:00 A.M.*  
He typed a short reply—just a period—and didn’t send it.

He walked to the back shelves, adjusting a few bottles that were already aligned.  
It wasn’t about neatness; it was about proof that time was still passing.  
Every bottle returned to its place was a small victory against chaos.

The back door creaked open.  
The barback poked his head in.  
“All off.”

“Good,” he said. “Lock up from inside.”

“Got it.”

The sound of the chain sliding through metal followed, steady and final.  
Moments later, the key slid across the counter, metal against wood.  
The younger man smiled faintly.  
“Night, boss.”

“Night.”

He watched him leave through the alley exit.  
The word *boss* always felt like something borrowed, something he hadn’t asked for but had to wear.

The music changed again—one last track.  
A muted trumpet, soft brushes on drums, a voice that barely sang.  
It was the sound of something that didn’t want to end but knew it should.

He walked the length of the bar, fingertips tracing the underside of the counter as he passed.  
Each imperfection in the wood was familiar, every notch and scratch its own story.  
He paused where she had sat.

The ring from her drink was still faintly visible.  
He placed his thumb over it.  
It was cool now, no longer part of the air’s warmth.  
He lifted his hand, but the ring stayed.

He smiled, almost to himself.  
Maybe some marks were supposed to remain invisible.

The refrigerator clicked off for its scheduled cycle.  
The silence it left behind was bigger than the noise it made.

He glanced at the clock—1:46 a.m.  
He loved that hour between closing and gone.  
The one where the city began to forget itself, and he was the only one left remembering.

He stacked the stools on the tables, one after another, the metal legs clinking softly.  
Lift, turn, set.  
It was a rhythm older than language.

A car passed by, headlights cutting across the room for a second.  
His reflection flickered in the mirror behind the bottles—one man, a thousand shadows.

The sound of the rain shifted; it wasn’t falling harder, just closer.  
He cracked the window open an inch, enough to smell the air.  
It carried the metallic scent of streetlight and wet asphalt.

He looked out.  
The streetlight across the road flickered three times before dying completely.  
He counted the seconds between flashes, like keeping time with an absent heartbeat.

A phone buzzed in the pocket of his jacket hanging by the door.  
He didn’t move.  
When it stopped, he still didn’t move.  
Some silences deserved to stay untouched.

He turned back to the bar, picking up the glass she had used one last time.  
He held it under the light.  
There was nothing remarkable about it—just a clean surface, clear edges, a faint warmth where his fingers met the glass.

He set it down again.

He walked to the light panel by the hallway.  
His hand hovered over the switch but didn’t press yet.  
He turned once more to look at the room.

The bottles glowed faintly, their labels unreadable in the low light.  
The chairs leaned against the tables like tired men sleeping on their arms.  
The mirror behind the bar held the room twice—once as it was, once as it had been.

He thought of nothing in particular.  
That was the point.

Finally, he reached for the switch.  
The lights dimmed, the hum faded, and the room folded itself into shadow.

Outside, the rain continued, steady and soft, washing the reflection of the sign from the window.  
Inside, the air stayed still, holding its warmth just a little longer.

He stood there a moment more, until the silence became complete.  
Then he turned, took his coat, and left through the back door.

The city swallowed him without sound.  
Only the faint circle on the counter remained, faint and perfect, waiting for morning.

Winnis
Winnis

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