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Burning Fates: Path of Fire Book One

Chapter 10: Traveling Tales

Chapter 10: Traveling Tales

Nov 15, 2025

A white butterfly fluttered by Keenin’s nose as he kept his eyes on the back of Bodwin’s large pack, clinking with dangling pots and stuffed to bursting with scaly skins. The large man didn’t even slow as they climbed a grassy rise. Keenin gripped his own small bag and a borrowed canteen of water and tried to keep up.

He nearly face-planted into Bodwin’s pack. The merchant had stopped at the height of the rise and now Keenin could see why. Spread out as far as he could see was the largest field of Goldenrods he had ever seen, all with their tall, broad-leafed stalks and strands of clustered yellow flowers sprouting from the top like a feather duster. White butterflies played on the breeze overhead and trails cut through the field where other groups had passed.

“This is Fiore. ‘The Field of Gold’ is what the elves call it,” Bodwin explained. “I never did see the connection. Field of heart attacks is more like it.”

“Why?”

Keenin took the opportunity to hand the canteen back to Bodwin, who accepted it. 

“Do you know how long this field is?” Bodwin remarked. “It takes a day to cross. My feet hurt just thinking about it. And you never quite know what's hidden in it.”

Keenin became aware that he couldn’t see trees on the horizon.

“You aren’t lost, are you?” he asked to make sure.

The merchant had promised a way to the city of Behoden and if it wasn’t for the comfort of some prepared food and interesting company Keenin might have found his own way.

“It’s a shortcut.”

That said, Bodwin moved down the slope and began wading through the chest-high stalks. Keenin followed behind, trampling on the stems. 

Bodwin wasn’t so bad. Sure he was ill-tempered and a little greedy, but he was a big talker and as they wandered across the empty field he began again to tell stories of his travels. Thanks to that Keenin figured out that Erinhall was where the elves lived and their forest not only grew huge because of constant rainfall but had a lot of strange creatures living in it. 

"Have you ever seen an elf?" Keenin asked him.

“A real elf. Never. They don’t show themselves outside the forest. I’ve only spoken to their half-breed cousins.” 

“Who?”

“You need to learn your politics. I’m talking about the half-human elves,” Bodwin said. “Pure breed elves are too snobby to speak with us.”

“So you can understand what they say?” Keenin asked interested.

“Sure. Tree is Sulla, Rock is De, and Flower is Sebe. That’s all you need to know.”

“But what if I want to speak to them?” Keenin said.

Elves were supposed to be the most amazing race. Half of the books he had seen were about them.

“No you don’t. They’re pompous fools that think they know everything just because of their ancestors.” 

“That’s like every noble in the world,” Keenin protested. “I’m sure there are open-minded elves too. Come on. How do you say ‘thank you’ in elf, or elvish, or whatever?”

“Or whatever…” Bodwin laughed even harder at his personal joke.

“Are there elves in the war?”

“I don’t think so. Maybe.”

“I heard…they are raising the dead…” 

“There are a lot of rumors. People also say twelve heroic elemental mages are fighting the front line, but we all know how privileged those sorts are. I can't teach you elvish, but how about history.” 

This conversation continued for a long while and ended with Keenin forgetting most as he saw more creatures and plants to be explained. Bodwin didn't seem to mind. 

When Bodwin wasn’t talking, Keenin would sometimes see him turn his head to look at the horizon beyond the field and smile to himself. 

Just as Keenin was thinking to ask if the merchant had a family waiting, Bodwin stopped smiling and stopped in his tracks. He raised a hand to shade his eyes as he looked into the distance. Keenin copied the motion, but he saw nothing out there. Bodwin let his arm fall. 

“Let’s move this way,” he said plowing a new path to the right.

“What’s wrong?” Keenin asked.

“There are more travelers.”

“Where?” 

“They were short. Probably gnomes. You would only see the flowers moving.”

“Why can’t we go straight?”

“I don’t want to risk my merchandise,” he grumbled.

Keenin decided to leave it at that. After all, he might have tried getting away with the man’s goods had he still been a thief. 

Still. It felt sad not to give the strangers a chance. For better or worse Keenin’s approach to strangers had changed because of Alaban, but he didn’t want to think about it. Having nothing better to do and feeling no worry over the approach of these short people, Keenin occupied himself with reciting elven words.

*

When the sun fell low in the sky, the two of them settled down in the middle of the field. They stomped out a circle in the flowers and sat. The plants made a soft bed, but since they couldn’t safely light a fire Bodwin handed out dried bread from his pack.

“Thank you,” Keenin said in elvish.

Bodwin gave him the interested look of someone who saw potential, then he dropped his eyes and sighed.

Cold air settled around them as the sun set. He rubbed at his left foot which felt notably chilled. Keenin absently thought of summoning a small flame between his palms for a bit more warmth, but settled for pulling over a ratty blanket and lay down. He watched the blinking of fireflies drifting through the tangle of stems.

He thought back to sparks rising into the sky and a dream where Tess accused him for staying alive. 

Bodwin took out a small notebook to scribble down some ideas, or whatever people wrote these days.

“Do you think…” Do you think ghosts are real? Keenin wasn’t sure he should ask.

“What did you say?”

“Nothing. Sorry, just forget it.”

Bodwin sighed. Then he shuffled around in his pack and handed over a faintly glowing white object, a rock? How ordinary? But it glowed? 

“Don’t lose that,” Bodwin said standing, “I’m going to relieve myself. Stay here with that so I can find you again.”

Bodwin tromped off into the field, and Keenin tiredly sat himself up to get a better look at what the merchant had handed over. Keenin experimentally closed his hand over it, shutting out the light, then opened it again. He placed the stone on the ground in front of him to see if that made a difference. 

Something else pulled at Keenin’s attention. He thought he heard someone talking. Bodwin. Was he muttering to himself? Keenin couldn’t pick out the words, but there were long pauses between when Bodwin spoke that made it seem like a conversation. Could there have been another person out there? 

He moved to crawl closer when a snake slithered out of the flower patch and raised its head in alarm. By the time Keenin waited for it to pass Bodwin rustled back through the field and the startled snake slid away. Keenin picked up the stone and handed it to Bodwin who returned it to the pack as though nothing had happened. Keenin stared at the man’s back as he settled down to sleep. 

Once more the fireflies became the only source of light and the deep shadows between Bodwin and him intensified Keenin’s unease. 

“Who were you talking to?” Keenin finally asked. 

“You heard that huh.” Bodwin didn’t sound concerned, but that wasn't an answer. 

“Was it other travelers?” Keenin questioned directly.

“No. Nothing like that,” Bodwin said. “I just like to give my thanks to the gods. Makes me feel braver out here by myself when I ask for their help.”

Oh, Keenin thought. 

“Do you think they exist?” he asked quietly. 

A silence spread between them. No reply ever came. As Keenin lay back to sleep, his thoughts drifting into static, he thought maybe it was better they didn't exist and that his troubles could be one long dream.
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