Read Will of the dragon :: Update!!!!!(Pls read)

I know this is quick in 1 day, but I just thought about it. Why don't I use 1st person perspective on my writing? I'm just a kid, so I still ahve alot to learn in writing. If you find any grammatical mistakes or spelling mistakes in my writing, feel free to comment it on here or that piece of writing!

Updates:

1.From now on, I will be using both 1st person, 2nd person, and 3rd person perspective.

2.The stories will be adjusted in length. (e.g. 2000-3000 words per chapter/episode)

3.I will be making parts for some long chapters. (e.g. XXXXXX(Part 1) XXXXXX(Part 2)

4.Christopher's new name(In this world, will be Sae)

From: The author.(Please subscribe and feel free to tell me my mistakes!)