Principle of the Issue (Part 1)
Nov 21, 2025
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The four Nikean officers complete their delivery, but must now deal with a certain Issue bothering EastMak...
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I've noticed a couple of spelling errors. In the paragraph where the officers are on the catwalk, where you describe the houses, you should use 'nor' instead of or. You would use 'nor' to connect ideas in a negative sense.
In the paragraph where you describe the clothes of the beggars that were once fancy, you have 'know' when it should be 'now.'
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