START OF MANGA/CHAPTER ONE

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Vampires having a party (night time)

Main character vampire is introduced – a young handsome vampire of 17 – black hair

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CHANGE SCENE

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Introduce the main character human – a man of about 30 – he used to be a General when fighting the war, but now like all the other humans, is kept as a slave – he has lost his name – and has been given a new name: MO-

Humans are registered based on their sex and blood type – male/blood type O negative (main character human)

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SCENE – (happens at night)

Main character human (named MO-) is working(humans are kept as slaves and do all the work vampires won’t – mostly building – roads/ homes for the vampire/bridges and whatever else)

MO- (main character human) is carrying boulders – he glances to the side and sees a human (newly captured) being held down/over a table. Human aged 16-17 – is being tattooed (as all humans who are captured/owned by vampires are)

Boy – ‘are you nearly finished….it hurts…’

Vampire standing beside him while other tattoos him – ‘just stay still…its nearly over…’

They finish and place a patch over new tattoo as it bleeds – boy is in pain

Vampire standing beside him as young human rises – ‘ok, get back to work’ – boy touches the patch over the back of his neck tenderly – he moves away

Another vampires speaks to ‘MO-’

‘Don’t you have work to do?’ - Human – ‘sorry’

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Add scene where main character sees vampire guard is beating a human – another vampire stops him – ‘we need the good workers…and anyway….this one has a rare bloodtype’

‘you favour him. (other vampire speaks) He’s getting cocky, thinking he can get away with anything’ – continue confrontation

MO- goes to his barracks at the end of the night – he sleeps in comfortable but crowded quarters – MO- goes to sleep – before he does, one of the other humans says how much he hates sleeping in the day – how much he misses the sunlight

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Main character vampire goes to sleep in his own room – he has a large and luscious room – large bed – outside through the large window it’s a dark night/raining

The sun comes out

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The vampires wake again when the sun goes down /humans are woken up by vampires and set to work again – MO- listens to his friend/one of the other humans complain bitterly about their situation – ‘so we work like this until we die? What happens when we get too old to work?’ – its then that MO- realises that there are no old people anymore, as he looks around, he sees no one above the age of 40 – MO- replies ‘this is our life now….until they decide to kill us. Not much left to hope for now…not anymore’

MO- is a quiet character who rarely speaks – he is aged about 30 and has blonde hair – used to be a General while fighting the war

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Scene back to main character vampire (aged 17 – no name yet – GOT A GOOD NAME FOR THE MAIN CHARACTER VAMPIRE? PLEASE LET ME KNOW IN THE COMMENTS)

Vampire wakes up – there is a party held where important vampires meet – vampire mingles – he leaves the main party and sees out in the corridor another vampire getting close to a human (some vampires have ‘escorts’ – humans that follow them around and supply them blood when they need it – these are often young and beautiful women of the favourite blood type of the vampire that chooses them) main character vampire sees another vampire drinking blood straight from the neck of the human who is accompanying him – she wears a dark dress that goes across her shoulders and wears her hair tied up – to expose her neck

When main character vampire (black hair/name still pending) returns to the corridor – she sees the female human alone – sitting and pale with a towel over her neck wound where her vampire ‘owner’ drank her blood – she has many scars over her neck and shoulders – female human is happy and polite to main character vampire as they speak together – shortly after main character vampire is summoned to the main office by his father (the leader of the vampires in this land)

Main character vampires goes to his fathers office – his father (a mature vampire of 40) speaks to him – ‘my kingdom when I did will pass onto your brother, so this probably wont be important to you, none the less I think you are old enough to learn about my empire and how to run it if I should die)

Main character vampire – yes father

Father speaks to him for a short while before being called away by messenger – there is still fighting going on between vampires in other lands – father leaves, telling his son he will be back soon

Father leaves and main character vampire/son is left alone

Main character vampire begins to get bored, then looks through his fathers notes splayed across the desk – he finds a list of human slaves and reads over it, one of the names stands out to him – MO- (a rare blood type)

ADD MORE SCENES

Later on main character vampire goes out to find MO-

When he sees the human for the first time he is surprised – ‘he’s really handsome…’

Later on the main character orders MO- to be brought to his room (does this secretly – vampire servants bring the human to his room)

Main character vampire looks over his notes as the human walks in – re-names him ‘Mon’ (MO negative – bloodtype)

The main character vampire drinks his blood – traumatic scene for human – violent scene – vampire drinks too much blood by accident – human nearly dies – human is returned to his barracks – weak and bleeding – vampire main character is punished for what he did (nearly killing human – especially a good worker with a rare blood type – human survives)

Vampire main character is placed in solitary confinement for a short time – he lies on his bed happy, licking his lips – ‘it was worth it…his blood…tasted so good…’ pauses ‘I hope I didn’t go too far…I hope I didn’t drink too much…………I hope he’s still alive’

Scene jumps to human main character – lying on his bed/bandages wrapped around his neck and shoulders – he is incredibly weak and pale/breathing weak - CONTINUE