"You or him you or him you or him."
The Words echo in my mind as I run through the the dark forest. Then finally I arrive at the river and I see it slowly rising. As it rises my brother Frisks lifeless body floats down the river and I immediately jump into the strong current. As the dark water drags me into its strong groove I grab Frisk's scruff and with all my might will drag him to land. Then, as I try to get myself onto land I lose feeling in my body all together. I see Frisk on land staring at me worriedly.
"He's alive!" I thought to myself smiling to myself.
Then as I start close my start to close my eyes and enter a everlasting sleep. And then as close my eyes I hear a voice saying:
You’ve chosen the bravest choice.
Older Maya's Comments-
Not bad,
especially considering I will still struggling at my 2 times tables at this time! I was sort of dramatic at this but that is okay for a prologue! The thing is, this story is constantly dramatic. I think this is because when writing boring parts I will get bored, I didn't know how to be interesting without killing someone! Reading this makes me feel really good at writing since I am comparing a less experienced me to a more experienced me!
Bye,
can't wait to see y'all on episode 1!
-Present Maya
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