Ch 1 Pg 3-4
Feb 06, 2018
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in which sharp tongue and shy wings.
Please tell me if something is wrong with the translation.
And thanks for the suuubs snif... (TvT)/
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I know a lot of people are giving conflicting advice about the bit of dialogue. If you want her to speak "properly" or not casually/slang-like, it would be "Why the fuck do you have wings?". If you would rather her speak slang-ish (the best way I can describe it really) or casually/improper you could keep it "Why the fuck you have wings?" or replace have with "got". It's complicated but "got" gives it a different mood/tone. It's hard for me to explain and I know it must be terribly confusing to a non-native speaker.
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