Deathberry is my first (publishable) novel and it's been finished for a few months now. It's not going to be the best because I'm trying to develop my writing skills. I've had to restrict some things (like use of swear words - although it would make it easier to express anger). I'm open to any criticism, tips, etc that can be given to improve my writing because I'm stuck at a certain point atm.
If you want me to share my character profiles, then please ask :D
I hope you enjoy Deathberry (when it comes out next week!)
Senior Detective Adamms was found stabbed to death and thrown out of his bedroom window onto the cobblestone pavement outside the apartment block. The suspects are gathered, but who could it possibly be? Is it the young, asian middle schooler, the rich arrogant couple, the junior detective or someone else? The murder suspects are confined together, and one by one they begin to drop like flies.
There's a murderer among them…
**This is my first novel, and I'm working to improve my writing so I'm open to any criticism and any tips that you can give me.**
**There will be death scenes so they'll be marked as mature.**