Deathberry is my first (publishable) novel and it's been finished for a few months now. It's not going to be the best because I'm trying to develop my writing skills. I've had to restrict some things (like use of swear words - although it would make it easier to express anger). I'm open to any criticism, tips, etc that can be given to improve my writing because I'm stuck at a certain point atm. 

If you want me to share my character profiles, then please ask :D

I hope you enjoy Deathberry (when it comes out next week!)