Souta draped over a damp shirt over the rusted wire of the clothesline, his movements mechanical and listless. The sun was gentle, its warmth caressing but not quite reaching the cold that had settled in his bones. He straightened and looked around the familiar expanse of his home—a palette of greens and browns muted by the passage of time. Once alive with the hum of village life, the air now carries only the melancholic chorus of cicadas, filling the quiet with their song.
The quiet was broken by the crunch of gravel under heavy footsteps. Souta turned to see the Yamada family trudging past, their belongings bundled in large, worn sacks that spoke of hasty departures. His friend, Hiroki, lagged behind, casting a long shadow in the afternoon light.
"Hey, Souta," Hiroki called out, a forced smile on his face as he approached the fence. "Heard about the station? They're closing it down after the last few of us leave."
Souta's hand paused mid-air, a wet cloth clutched in his grasp. "I hadn't heard," he replied, his voice barely above a whisper.
"Yeah," Hiroki continued, adjusting the strap of his bag on his shoulder. "It's still open for now, though. Just so we can all get out to somewhere with a bit more... life."
A silence hung between them, heavy with unspoken understanding. Then Hiroki leaned forward, his eyes searching Souta's. "Do you really want to stay here all by yourself?" he asked, the concern genuine in his tone. "There's so much more out there, man. Remember how you always talked about writing stories and collecting books? There's a whole world beyond this place where you could share them—places rich with literature, where you could build a library of your own."
Souta felt a pang in his chest, an ache for dreams long tucked away. He glanced at the abandoned homes, windows like vacant eyes watching him, and then back to Hiroki, whose expression held a mix of hope and farewell.
"Maybe," Souta finally muttered, turning back to his laundry with a heavy heart. "Maybe."
With a lingering gaze, Souta watched Hiroki's retreating figure until he was nothing but a speck in the distance. The last echoes of conversation hummed in Souta's ears as he contemplated the idea of departure. Everyone else had already left, but how could he abandon the worn-out paths and overgrown gardens, the legacy that generations had toiled to create? His mother's voice whispered through the chambers of his memory, soothing yet firm, "Your father and I worked really hard to build this home for us. Our only wish is that you take care of it and cherish it with your life."
A sigh escaped him, laded with the weight of unfulfilled promises. Souta's hands fell to his sides, the damp cloth forgotten. There was no point in pretending to finish the chore; there would be no one to witness the neat rows of laundry or to appreciate the homely scent of sun-dried clothes.
He wandered aimlessly through the village, each step sinking into the soft earth like a silent testament to his solitude. The once merry shouts of children playing were replaced by the creaking of empty swings in the breeze, and the lively chatter at the marketplace gave way to the whisper of swaying trees. It was in this haunting quietude that the reality crashed over him like a wave—he was utterly alone.
Panic clawed at his chest, sending him sprinting back to the sanctuary of his family home, where every creak of the floorboards and gust against the window panes seemed to echo his mother's dying wish.
There was a comic contest a few months back themed, "The Last Train" that I wanted to enter and this was the story that I wrote for it. I, however, managed no such comic. But the story is meaningful to me so I figured that it would be better to put it up somewhere where it could be read rather than let it rot among the multitude of my files.
It's inspired by Japanese ghost towns as I wanted to illustrate the contrast of lush greenery and old, wooden houses. The pictures that inspired me were very beautiful and I wanted to capture that beauty in a comic, though I wasn't able to produce a comic in the end. But here's the story and I hope you enjoy it :)
Echo is a collection of stories that reflect the quiet moments where choices, consequences, and revelations resonate. Each tale explores the human condition, offering a glimpse into the lessons we carry and the echoes they leave behind.
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