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Ghost blues

I want to be noticed

I want to be noticed

Nov 23, 2020

Jon's POV 

It's been so long since the incident of that crazy neighbor who launched that rock on me and it was the worst day of all because Lily my girlfriend and now wife was now given birth to my daughter and I wasn't there for her... just thinking about it makes me feel like I have a bitter taste in my mouth (if I have a mouth) "so are you just gonna mope here or what?" I turned around and saw Anastasia aka Annya (from lilmonstergurldesi) "oh well I-I'm not moping!" I exclaimed like I wasn't moping "Oh Jonathan It's written on you're face..." Annya said which made me gave in "fine I was actually thinking of Lily and..." I replied when I almost broke into tears "Well Jon there is a way to see them..." Annya suggested that made me looked up to her "Wait really?!" "Yes, you are a ghost Jon, you can go to them... why do you think I always tell you about my Son, Tobi...?" I went silent for a brief moment than I answered "Oh yeah" Annya silently chuckled "Go on" "R-right!" I bid farwell to her and went to Lily's address 

I was now in Lily's house, still the same as last time I was here, as I went to knock on the door, I remembered "wait... I'm a ghost" and went through the door, And to believe it still looks the same over the last years I was dead but I guess Lily couldn't move on then "Mama!Mama!" A little girl's voice coming from the kitchen, I took a peek and there I saw Lily, her silver hair was still the same only a bit longer, her sense of fashion never gets old "Mama! Look I drew You, Me and Papa!" As I saw her drawing...God thank you for blessing me with a kindhearted Daughter! "Oh why this is beautiful Juliet!" Lily complimented our Daughter who's named Juliet "How about I put this masterpiece in the fridge for Papa to see this" "Okay Mama!" Juliet then ran out of the kitchen and added "Can you tell Papa if he loves my drawing" Lily paused and answered "of course sweetie" and the little girl ran towards the stairs Imma guessed that she went to her room then...I heard... sobs I then turned around to see Lily bursting in tears hugging the drawing "Oh Jon... I wish you could've seen our Daughter now..." through all that sniffing I can tell... she is mourning again, last time when she was mourning was when her Mom died due to an illness that she couldn't afford to seek medical help but I guess this is worst "I know Lily, I know" I said hoping that she can hear me but failed... after she put a drawing on the fridge she went to the living room to relax a bit while I wanted to see the house one more time... I went upstairs and found Juliet's room that was decorated in light blue with glitter stars... she was playing tea party with her dolls and plushies "would you like some more tea Madam Pompom" she ask the poodle plushie "why yes please Madam Juliet" hehehe I really am blessed with a Daughter like her "Oh hello there Mister Blue..." Mister Blue, I saw Juliet looking at me while grabbing a tea cup for me "Would you like to play with me" Wait a minute... "Y-you can see me?!" I exclaimed like she could hear me and she answered me with a nod "...Oh My God"

To be continued...

𝙼𝚊𝚗 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚒𝚜 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚐𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚝𝚎𝚜𝚝 𝚜𝚝𝚘𝚛𝚢 𝙸 𝚑𝚊𝚟𝚎 𝚎𝚟𝚎𝚛 𝚠𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚝𝚎𝚗..𝚢𝚎𝚜 𝙸 𝚌𝚊𝚗 𝚗𝚘𝚠 𝚎𝚡𝚙𝚛𝚎𝚜𝚜 𝚖𝚢𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚏 𝚝𝚑𝚛𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑 𝚜𝚝𝚘𝚛𝚢 𝚋𝚞𝚝 𝚊𝚗𝚢𝚠𝚊𝚢𝚜... 𝙸 𝚜𝚞𝚛𝚎 𝚑𝚘𝚙𝚎𝚍 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚊𝚕𝚕 𝚎𝚗𝚓𝚘𝚢𝚎𝚍 𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚍𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚙𝚕𝚎𝚊𝚜𝚎 𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚢 𝚝𝚞𝚗𝚎𝚍 𝚏𝚘𝚛 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚗𝚎𝚡𝚝 𝚘𝚗𝚎 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝙸'𝚕𝚕 𝚜𝚎𝚎 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚊𝚕𝚕 𝚗𝚎𝚡𝚝 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚕𝚞𝚟 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚊𝚕𝚕 𝚋𝚢𝚎~| (• ◡•)|

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LilMonsterGurlDesi
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Its a pretty good try. But one thing u should work on is spacing, and making sure your uppercase letters are in the right spots. Also, "Denial" is where you deny something. In Lilys case, she would think Jon isnt dead bc shes in denial about it. She's in "mourning" still if its still affecting her badly. Also, gotta work on those commas. But honestly, good job, i made similar minor errors when i was your age, so u over all still did well.

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