Prologue
Mar 13, 2026
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Your art is very pretty, especially the way you draw the trees and food imo. The trees feel very all encompassing and comfy almost, especially in the first panel, and the food looks delicious.
I will say tho, the two panels after the food feel like something is missing. The angle is pretty harsh, so I can’t tell if I’m looking at running or crawling. If that was the intention, which, now that I think about it, makes sense for a not quite human character who seems very injured, but even then, the angles feel off in my brain trying to understand where things are.
Please don’t see this as like, “oh my gosh trash artist” because that is very much not the case. I’m hoping this comes off more as constructive criticism because this is coming from someone who thinks your art is good, but also recognizes that you’re probably closer to a beginner when it comes to intense action panels with strong angles. I think it’s great to try and push your skills, so keep up the good work and I hope you improve greatly over the course of making this
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