This is the Second Ed. of LNS it is A COMPLETELY DIFFERENT story. The heart and characters will mostly be the same, but the story itself has grown, morphed, and become something new.
For the original story, I have created a new series. So if you're interested in seeing where it all started feel free to check it out.
YOU WILL KNOW WHEN A NEW EDITION CHAPTER IS POSTED BASED ON THE NEW THUMBNAIL
WHAT'S DIFFERENT?
Character names have changed!
George has been changed to Taiyo. There will probably be more name changes in the future.
I want this version to make you feel hungry.
My goal for this ed. is for you, my lovely readers, to want to eat while reading. It's called Late Night Snack so grab some cake, popcorn, a steak, and get reading. 😉
The plot has been fleshed out. I cannot stress this enough. This is a new story. You will know from the first chapter posted that you are not reading the same story as the first Ed.
The POV has Changed!
I originally wrote this story in the first-person perspective, however, in the second edition the story is written in the third-person perspective.
For Example, "My shoulders slumped and my heart felt heavy in my chest." V.S.
"Maddy's shoulders slumped, his heart, an iron weight on his chest."
Thank you all again for reading my story!
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