As pink boarded the airship, she could hear people talking from inside. She walked inside to see lime, blue, and black in an argument about how deep the gap in the gap room is. "IM TELLING YOU ALL ITS NOT THAT DEEP!!!" Blue yelled at lime. Black turned to pink and said "oh uh....hi" "hello! What are you guys arguing about?" Pink asked.
"Just about how deep the god damn gap is in the gap room" black responded. "THE GAP IS SUPER DEEP YOU TWIT!!!" Lime yelled at blue in the background, "WHY THE HELL WOULD WE NEED A FLOATING PLATFORM TO GET ACROSS?!". Right as he said that cyan and yellow boarded the ship.
They stared at black, lime, blue, and pink with confused looks. "What the heck is all this yelling for?" Asked yellow. Pink shrugged and walked out of the room.
"Pfft why are they so loud?" Pink thought to herself. "Eh they will all be dead soon anyway" she smiled under her helmet. "Yes they will all be dead within a matter or time...." she inspected her knife with an evil smile.
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