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Skymission

Mercury Falls

Mercury Falls

Mar 24, 2021

I’m falling… 

Me? 

That’s not possible….. 

WAIT 

 

An original story by

Chinerakorame

In association with

Me from 4 years ago with the idea


Skymission

Chapter 1 

Mercury Falls 

                Urghh… I open my eyes to see a blinding ceiling light shining down on my poor, light-sensitive eyes. 

                “She’s awake!!” Someone cries out from next to me. 

                Will you shut up, man? I just want to sleep.. Wait.. I CAN’T MOVE. Why is it that my body will not answer to the call from its very controller?! Someone please flip me onto my side. My whole body aches right now. It would feel good, I’d appreciate it. 

                “Oh, never mind. She fell back asleep.” The bed-side person commentates. 

                “But wasn’t she awake just a few seconds go?!” Another voice responds. 

                “I don’t know, she had her eyes open, and all of a sudden, they’re closed again!” 

                “Is she dead? Check for breathing.” 

                Someone’s salty fingers wave under my nostrils. I snort, holding my breath. Go away. Please just let me sleep. 

                “SHE STOPPED BREATHING.” 

                “HOW?!” 

                “I checked like you asked me to, felt a breath, then IT STOPPED. What do we do now? They will yell at me again if I don’t bring her back alive…” 

                “Oh, shut it. She’s fine. After all, four years have passed since she fell. We just have to wait.” 

                I opened my eyes again, greeted by the shrill screeches of the two women who had turned to face me just as I ‘awoke’ for the second time. Turning, a girl with green hair that melted into a calming blue with eyes that reflected many colors, as well as a girl with golden scythe-shaped strange hairstyle and purple eyes stare at me. 

                “W… Who…” 

                “She doesn’t know how to talk anymore, Saturn, what will we do?!” The green-girl gasps. 

                “I DON’T KNOW, Earth, do something! Give her some water!” Strange-hairstyle roars. 

                ‘Where’s the water?!” 

                “DOESN’T YOUR PLANET HAVE 75% OF THAT?!!!?” 

                “Oh, sorry. Forget I asked.” 

                With that, Green-Girl stands up and leaves the room. Left alone with Strange-Hairstyle, she starts to talk. 

                “So…--” 

 

Skymission [Mercury Falls]  

Author’s notes: 

Woahhhh I’m finally releasing a book I’ve tried to draw many, MANY times… 

And yes, draw. 

Which I am horrible at. 

I apologize for my lack of writing skills. At least they are far better than my drawings. 

My plan is to write the story as I draw, so the first chapter of [Skymission] as a comic will likely come out soon. Or not. It depends on my schedule. Which I don’t follow. 

So anyways, thank you for reading, I appreciate your support and hope you will follow me forevermore! 

~Harbinger of Seasons, Chinerakorame :V 

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It’s finally out, and she’s ready to fall through space and time! Wait.. that’s not right..?

#Mercury #saturn #earth #water #breathing #Sleep

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Great story! You can broaden your audience by publishing your story on NovelStar Mobile App.

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