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With Your Last Heartbeat

To whom his love commits me here

To whom his love commits me here

Dec 06, 2023

They say that the heart was discovered thousands of years ago, and since then, the human being has given it many meanings. For Christians and Jews it meant the throne of God, for the Egyptians emotion and will, and for Chinese culture it represented the mind and intention. It is loaded with values ​​such as tenderness, compassion, hope and, above all, love. That love that people learn to feel for others, which is so beautiful and pure, so warm and joyful. And it is precisely this same one…

"Ah... five more minutes, please... mh? Heh?!" I said while opening my brown eyes in surprise while I stared at something over my light table. 

… the one that was going to be the heart of my story.

"Oh! I'm going to be late!"

Pedaling fiercely, I raced through the neighborhood streets, bathed in the warm morning sun. Clad in summer clothes with a backpack on my back, I felt like a racing driver on a supercar. Despite the beautiful weather, my mind was consumed by the incredible bad luck that had marked the abrupt start to my day.

"I had to wake up at six in the morning to have breakfast, wash and fold my clothes, prepare everything and travel, but my cell phone ran out of battery!"

I remembered the panic I felt when I looked at the time on the digital clock in my room, still in a drowsy state, just to then discover that my phone would not respond at all.

"Now I have to arrive to college in… twenty minutes! Damn, on my first day."

To reach my new college in the north of the city, I had to traverse over fifty blocks from my neighborhood at the opposite end. Despite meticulous planning with my navigation app in the days prior, I found myself intermittently closing my eyes, lamenting the situation.

"Normally it would take me half an hour to get there, so I had to leave my house a little while before, but…"

I shot a determined look ahead, which penetrated the road.

"I have calculated it. If I hurry up and I'm so lucky all the traffic lights are green, going this fast, I can be there in… twenty minutes!"

Thinking about it again reassured me. It was always comforting to feel strong.

"I still have a chance!"

As I let out this scream, I applied even more force to the metallic pedals and went through another section at high speed. After two streets flat out, I came to an intersection with a busy street.

"Let's go! I can't waste any sec-"

I was overjoyed when I saw that the traffic light was red. Instinctively, I looked to the right, sensed where the traffic was coming from. The first thing I saw, unmistakably, was a green and white bus going at full speed.

"Aaahhh!"

I slammed on the brakes with full force, and the sudden deceleration nearly catapulted me over the bike. The rear wheel skidded left, counter to the turned handlebars, just as the bus blared its horn insistently.

Luckily, and in a terrifying scenario, I braked just above the pedestrian lane and the bus passed about two meters away in front of me. I was still shaking a little due to the drag that almost sent me directly underneath that bus' front wheels.

"Oh! I'm sorry!" I yelled in vain at the driver.

I wasn't the kind of person who broke the rules, and I even felt a little guilty for having been in a borderline situation involving another person. Knowing some of the drivers on the green bus line added to the unease; I could have been confronted by a familiar face, one of those who always said hello and knew where you were going.

The traffic light quickly turned green. If it had happened ten seconds earlier, I would have saved myself a bad moment. I crossed the street, still shaking, but with the need to speed up again.

"Hey, watch out!" someone yelled at me from the left side of the block.

I turned my head to see who was talking to me so suddenly. Standing in the doorway of a small, old-fashioned store, a woman was waving her left arm, with which she was holding a bag. I immediately recognized her.

"Oh! Miss Irma!"

I veered off course to the left to go between the parked cars and get on the sidewalk right next to her. I stopped the bike parallel to her bakery and got out quickly.

"What did you just do? That was very dangerous! From this side it looked like you got hit by the bus! You gave me a good scare" she told me not with a scolding tone but with concern.

"Sorry about that. I'm running late for college! Say hello to Don Hugo for me!" I exclaimed, referencing her husband, the co-business owner, as she had mentioned in our previous conversations about their long marriage. Swiftly adjusting my backpack, I pushed myself to depart at full speed.

"Wait! I'll give you a croissant, they just came out of the oven" Doña Irma tried to hurry inside the store.

"Eehh? But, but…"

I hesitated at least three times, torn between continuing on my way or waiting, but my inner spirit compelled me to stay. It wasn't unusual; she always treated me with buns or something delightful when I passed her shop. As a regular customer, I often helped with heavy tasks or deliveries on my bike, a tradition embraced by the entire neighborhood over the last two or three decades. So, it wasn't surprising when she insisted on giving me one of her pastries for free. I had known from the start that straying for a moment meant the chance to enjoy one. Sorry punctuality, but a croissant is not denied to anyone.

After a few seconds, she came out with a cardboard-wrapped medialuna in her hands, a typical kind of argentinean croissant,

"Here you have!" She handed it to me.

"Thank you! See you later," I greeted her with an energetic smile.

"Don't do crazy things again!" She warned me while shaking her arm to greet me.

"I won't," I yelled to my back.

I put the croissant in my backpack and quickly headed out into the street. I couldn't eat while driving, and it's always nice to have something for recess, so I kept it between my books for the rest of the journey.

And there I was, on my bike. I'm Leonardo Soraire, but everyone calls me Leo. An 18-year-old university student, or well, I'm starting today. With short brown hair, a slightly short stature, and a relatively athletic body, I was decked out in comfortable summer clothes, sporting a big smile on that beautiful yet hurried day.

I continued on my way just as quickly. Every once in a while, I ran into someone I knew, and knowing myself, I could not help myself but to talk to them.

"Hey Leo, good morning," say Carlos, the butcher.

"Hello, Carlos, sorry but I'm running late!," I said without slowing down.

"Alright, but did you see the match yesterday? The Burners won, it was amazing!"

I hit the brakes. Carlos, much like me and the rest of our neighborhood, was a Burners fan. The Burners, our local football team, had endured years of poor results, but it felt like we were finally on the path to something glorious and reclaiming our spot among the country's top teams. I'm sorry punctuality, but a croissant and a football talk are not denied to anyone.

"Have you seen it? We are now third on the leaderboard. If we keep going like this, we can probably enter some international competition for next year," I started enthusiastically talking to him.

"I hope so. It was 3-1, right? Finally we can win a match without suffering the last minutes"

"Yeah, even if the referee seemed to be against us..."

It was then when I realized I couldn't be doing such a timewasting thing. As soon as I remembered my goal, I climbed onto my bike again.

"Sorry, I'm late, I really can't talk now. See you next time!" 

"Okay, see you!," he waved my arm to say goodbye, too.

And so, after many disturbances, I could continue. I rode several more blocks through some narrow streets until I reached a crossroads with one of the main avenues. I quickly merged into traffic cautiously and continued along.

"Ah, it feels great!" I said when receiving mild wind in the face.

Deep down, I relished it. I loved venturing out on my bike, exploring the city. Despite the physical fatigue, the journey to my study spot infused me with energy. I might be running late, but the adrenaline of racing against time was truly exhilarating.

A few blocks later, I saw how a large green space appeared on the right.

"The park, let's see..."

I quickly put together a mental map. I knew my neighborhood and most of the southern half of the city like the back of my hand. I had always had a good memory, which was very useful in these kind of situation.

"To get to my college, I have to go through the city to the northeast, so at some point I'll have to turn right. So, if I cut through the park, I'm going to be saving a lot of time" I thought.

I kept pedaling until my bike reached the corner of the park entrance. I turned my maneuver to the right and my bike crossed the iron gate swiftly, without hesitation and began to go through the first of the many park roads. Since it was early and on a weekday, there weren't many people. Rather, it was almost empty.

"Well, this should save me some time" I said as I vigorously pedaled.

Traveling in this way and with so few people around, despite the delay in the schedule, was a very enjoyable activity. You could relax feeling the wind on your face and the vertigo of speed. One of life's little pleasures.

The path entered a slightly steep but long descent among the great lake on it's center. The park, with many undulations and vast trees, fit in with the typical temperate vegetation of the area.

The descent propelled me to gain speed gradually. Trees blurred past as my adrenaline surged, fueled by the growing hope of reaching my destination on time. Ahead lay a gentle right curve, leading to an intersection visible in the distance.

"If I take this intersection to the left, I will be able to leave the park without a problem. From there it's four blocks to the next avenue, I can go about eight more and then..."

While I was calculating how I should continue my journey, however, something was about to take me by surprise. It seemed to me that something was moving ahead.

"Huh?"

I quickly focused my attention on what laid ahead. All the tranquility, all the calm and the sensation that I had been experiencing was about to vanish thanks to the bicycle that was approaching at great speed from the right.

"Oh! Watch out!" was the only thing I managed to scream.

I slammed on the brakes hard and the bike screeched loudly. I felt a sudden pull, but this time, contrary to what happened with the bus, I couldn't brake in time. Before I knew it, the other person was in front of me.

I felt a strong impact and was thrown forward. The only thing I remember from those moments is the sensation of being in the air, and then falling with all the weight of my body on the asphalt. I didn't feel terror, pain or despair. I was just freefalling into the road, shocked and confused.

I landed on the asphalt on my right side. I felt like I did a couple of spins on the ground before coming to a halt.

"Ah… damn"

Little by little the state of shock disappeared and I could realize what had happened. My hands hurt a little and I had a scrape on my knee and several sores on my legs, but luckily it didn't seem like anything serious. Wearing short clothing didn't help to avoid getting injured, but it could have been a lot worse. I relieved and quickly came to my senses, then raised my head to where the other person was.

"Ah…"

There, a few meters away, the other cyclist was down. It was on its back, in a fetal position and barely seemed to move.

"Hey, are you okay?"

"Gah…"

It barely managed to moan, still on its back and with little movement. Naturally I was worried.

"Hey… hey, react, please"

I walked over while standing awkwardly, my knees and legs a little sore. Every step I took felt my legs weaken. With each step that I approached, I was analyzing its figure. It was wearing a beige jacket that covered its entire body from behind, cotton pants and small black sneakers. That was very atypical due to the actual template weather, and to make things worse, I couldn't see what happened to it. When I finally reached the cyclist, I leaned down to help.

"Hey, are you-"

"Let go!"

I couldn't help but be surprised when the cyclist's high-pitched voice complained as it brushed my arm away. Immediately afterward it turned to me and I got a good look at his face. It was a girl.

Her long black hair, previously covered entirely by the hood of her jacket, waved flamboyantly as she turned her head. I could see her dark blue eyes, possibly the most beautiful I have ever seen, narrow angrily at me. Despite her furious face, she looked like an angel. I couldn't help but gaze at her for a moment.

"You… you do know that you should look at the road when you ride a bicycle, don't you?" she yelled at me.

After a few seconds still in shock, amazed by the recent discovery, I managed to answer her.

"Huh? The same to you! Don't you know how to react when someone approaches from another street?"

I wasn't sure what had happened, but one thing was clear: I didn't like her attitude at all. Much less when I was having an amazing time and a speeding cyclist ambushed me on a crossroad that should be empty.

"Huh?" she was surprised.

"You complain so much, but I was the only one who saw you. Until I yelled at you, you hadn't even seen me. And you tell me to look at the road?" I told her exalted.

"Hey, don't tell me anything! You were coming too fast for me to have seen you. Look where your bike ended up" she alluded to how much it had flown after the impact, while pointing firmly at it. She had suddenly stood up and was facing me directly.

"But if you also came at great speed!"

"It isn't true!"

"It is!"

"No!"

With each shout, we got closer angrily. It was definitely not the ideal way to start the day. I sighed unhappily.

"Ah, whatever, are you okay?" I asked, still worried.

"Y-yes, luckily. But you must- gah!"

I was getting ready to effectively help her so I could finally be on my way. I wanted to leave that bad moment behind and continue to my destination, where arriving on time was almost impossible. But as she spoke to me, something changed in her. The girl was interrupted from one moment to another and grabbed her chest quickly. Her face showed a strong expression of pain, and she closed her eyes very tightly. I naturally worried at such a sudden reaction.

"Hey, are you alright?!"

She was still clutching her chest, tightly clutching her jacket and the sole shirt underneath it. Her face showed pain, but also fear.

She was shocked for about ten seconds, until the effect seemed to calm her down. She was breathing heavily, but was able to open her eyes and slowly recover. She stared at the floor between her legs, bent so that she was almost forming a fetal position, for several more seconds. Then she looked up and was surprised by my figure.

"Do you want some?" I told her while holding a bottle of water close to her face, while still standing on my feet.

Her face went from being surprised to returning to the seriousness and anger of before. I can't be sure, but she seemed to nod slightly at my offer.

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Meet Leo, an eager and full of energy boy... who is running late for his first university day! Pedaling through the busy roads of his city, he decides to take the park route to save some time, until something unexpected blocks his way...

#bike #bicycle #late #heart #boy #Energy #race #university #college #park

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The heart is located on the left hand side of the body round the chest area. Unless you're one of those rare people where your internal organs are on the opposite side of your body ^^

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The heart is a precious thing, and within the heart is love. The love you need to overcome fate. When Leo bumped Clara while going really fast on a bike, he could have never imagined that his life would turn upside down. A story that proves angels do exist and can shine the brightest light, even if sometimes they need someone to give them their wings back.

Written by: Shulox
Artwork by: Taka (on Pixiv)
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