I am a weird,nerd 15 yr old ladygirl who enjoys reading and laughing.Although my life is a crappy potato I get thru. YAY
{and although i obviously love pizza i'm not THAT fat...sometimes i have pineapples too!}
So i reviewed it and it looks really good, thus far the story line seems great, but and it may just be me, you should practice a little more on your drawing it looks great but more detail would help the story along. And maybe a prologue for those who haven't read it yet.