Joined Sep 2016 USA
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sorry for the intrusion... im uhh not to used to asking, but could you please give me feedback on my comic?
https://tapas.io/episode/847313
Id really appreciate it!
Umm...only if you want to of course..sorry for putting you on the spot like this...;w;
https://tapas.io/episode/847313
Id really appreciate it!
Umm...only if you want to of course..sorry for putting you on the spot like this...;w;
It's interesting. The skeleton hand sticking out of the pool makes it seem like the plot deeper than it appears. But I don't really see what the story is leading up to or what the relation between the characters is. It's not a bad start but you should really add something into the next chapter that grabs the readers attention or they might lose interest.
I hope this was helpful spacewaste.
Also would you mind reading my novel, Negative One, I'm trying to turn it into a comic later on. Thanx.
I hope this was helpful spacewaste.
Also would you mind reading my novel, Negative One, I'm trying to turn it into a comic later on. Thanx.
