Joined Apr 2021 Phoenix, AZ
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Did another edit as I realized that I had some more crater-sized plot holes between chapters 10 through 18. Fixed them
Hi Everyone! I've done a major overhaul of the story. I wasn't happy with the Joseph and Adrian story arc, so I took Madeline out of the boys home and had her meet Adrian and Joseph another way. I thought the story was getting a bit too grim and started feeling a bit sorry for Madeline! The overhaul begins with the prologue.
