Prologue 2: A Fated Reunion
Mar 18, 2018
Daknight
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Like the art, maybe the text position could improve a it. Each word it's own line, for some text bubbles is ok. For example the 'Come here for a moment, you and I to talk' you could put come here together and the you and I together too for easier reading. Is just a suggestion to help out.
Hope to see more of it, liking the grayscale, you use it well as details of background and character can be distinguish well!
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