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Starshinesy

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so in this one i was originally planning on starting the story off where page 2 is, but i added this for a bit of foreshadowing.

now you see, i made a mistake throughout this whole comic that really brings it down, and if i were to continue it where i left off right now... well i wouldn't do it,

throughout this story i made 2 mistakes. i used colored lineart, which doesn't look that bad in general, but the next page really shows off how bad it is, plus it takes way too long, and the second mistake is that were is no border or space between panels. the space between panels doesn't matter much, but the border really helps make things feel less cramped.

both of these flaws shine through in the second page, in which i will explain a lot more reasons as to why this was a mistake. more smaller reasons to be exact

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