Ch 11 pages 1-5 testing
May 22, 2018
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The incomplete page I included because I made a change from the rough draft that seemed kind of important.
Since xe is looking in the direction of the 'distortion' instead of away, made it a little more obvious that Al can't see it... because it just makes it seem like xe's not paying attention when the floor would obviously start to break under xem.
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