Ch 11 pages 1-5 testing
May 22, 2018
The incomplete page I included because I made a change from the rough draft that seemed kind of important.
Since xe is looking in the direction of the 'distortion' instead of away, made it a little more obvious that Al can't see it... because it just makes it seem like xe's not paying attention when the floor would obviously start to break under xem.
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Here's where all the comic pages are posted initially for test reading before finalization!!
Rough drafts, partial, and complete pages starting from book 2
Comments, concerns, and criticisms welcome!!
Rough drafts, partial, and complete pages starting from book 2
Comments, concerns, and criticisms welcome!!
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