Interesting story! I hope you don’t mind me making a suggestion, but I think it would be easier to read if you uploaded the panels separately. The first couple of pages are hard to read because when I zoom in, the text is blurry. If you uploaded the panels separately, we would be able to see your artwork better as well. Other than that, you did a good job!
This is a comic for my English class. For this class, we had read a comic called "Persepolis" by Marjane Satrapi and create our own comics about someone experiencing prejudice. I have always been very interested in the history of Hawaii and I thought that this would be the perfect opportunity for me to learn more about it. So, here is the fictional story I created about O'ahu, Hawaii.
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