Good morning everyone! Sorry about the late page, I completely forgot to schedule it last night to upload this morning :P
Lilith getting her hair caught in the door is something I've really been wanting to add into the comic. I want it to become sort of a running gag with her (her hair is crazy long after all). I thought it'd be funny to show her super long hair getting caught and being sat on and kind of being in the way in contrast to other super long anime hair that just magically stays out of the way when the person sits down or walks through a door.
So you can expect this type of thing to show up more in the comic in the future.
I may or may not be changing the dialogue font, the one I'm currently using was made from a variant of my handwriting and when the text is smaller a lot of the skinnier letters meld together, making it hard to read some words.
Luckily for me there isn't much dialogue that'll need to be changed if I do decide to switch to a different font. And luckily for all of you, things will be easier to read.
I really like the stars on Lilith's bedroom door. It's cute and you can tell that's her room but it's also a fairly normal thing for a teenage girl to do, I think. My own bedroom door was covered in stuff when I was a teenager (Fullmetal Alchemist art I'd clipped from magazines and printed off the internet and such) so I think it's a nice little detail to have.
I really like this page, even if the perspective in the first panel killed me. The perspective on page 5 and 6 will be worse though. Darn perspective. Oh there's also the little tiny pictures in the picture frame, but I'll talk about those more next week.
Mmmm I think that's everything for this week. I caught some kind of cold or something so I've been mildly sick the past week, so that mixed with my absent-mindedness and some cold medicine led to the page being late today. I promise I'll be on time next week!
Xenobiosis is a fantasy-adventure story about Lilith and her journey to find her angel mother and demon father, who abandoned her long ago. Along the way she is joined by a gallery of distinctive characters including two humans, a witch, and a mermaid. The story takes place on a distant planet, full of unique flora, fauna, and landscapes; which Lilith and her friends encounter along with the diverse people who live there.
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