Maybe It'll Go Away
Aug 28, 2018
Nin the Skeleton
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Other than grammar, I can't say much, as this is mostly text based, which is fine, there's no issue with that as you can do interesting tings. Although, since it's mostly text at this point consider cleaning up the handwriting and spicing up the text blocks. Consider symbol storytelling as a means of moving along the text, small bits and details to make it more interesting.
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