Mahogany
Aug 28, 2018
Mahogany! He's got a jaw prosthesis, for reasons he doesn't like talking about...
I really don’t like the layouting in this; I was still trying to figure out what I wanted to do. The art in these (and the past few) pages also look pretty wonky over all since I’m new to this style. I actually improved extremely fast while making this comic as you’ll see later, since it’s all about drawing the same thing over and over, so pro tips kids. It will look a lot better in the future!
Rosakaz
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I understand your own critique, but when you can see what things you should do better, you're already improving! BUT. Your pages look amazing! I love the dreamy soft lighting and vivid colours you use. And the facial expressions are just brilliant. Keep up with the great work!
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