Do these souls remind you of something? ["hidden adult jokes"... *dirty grin*] Ah, no that's just me being silly. But I thought this form might be fitting because of the meaning... and for flying around in midair...
well, so why this page is coloured, you ask? To introduce where we'll be going next time, of course~
the reveal will be on the next page! And Umeko won't like it one bit!
"Took me long enough?" ahh hahah what are you saying guys? *sweatmark* Oh myyy
Oh, no! Reminds me nothing, no no no! [''Grins back'']
This page is beautifully designed right now. You've used every single of the given corrections to the max! But the greatest thing in this page... by far...
*The ribbon!*
Yeah, milady, you get I'm bringing that up again! I think I'm just going to print it and hang it on my wall. Best reference I could ever think of.
But... I honestly think you should do every page in colour. We've spoken about that before, but my opinion about that is only growing after seeing this page for over 10 times and still not getting boring by it. Food for thought!
This girl thought that ending up as God's Assistant was the weirdest thing that could happen to her in afterlife...
But there are way stranger things out there in heaven!
Follow Umeko, a mortal girl, as she meets new friends and foes, rescues planets and descends into hell, and maybe, just maybe, thaws the heart of her Goddess along the way?
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