Eril Pt2
Sep 28, 2018
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not what you'd expect after 2 months i know... let this be a reminder that lineart isnt for me.. stuff happened but im doing better now so i will try to upload next update in 2 weeks !
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Eh style fluccuates. And I'm excited for the next update but don't push too hard!
If I may give a little bit of critique, I think if you make a little bit more contrast between the subject/mc in the panel and the background the page interprets/reads a lot nicer. Right now due to the colours, the whole page looks a little washed out. And if that's what you're going for that's great, there's other ways to create contrast. if it wasn't for the lineart v.s. lack thereof in the forest bg I think I'd have lost your character in the scene. Otherwise, I like where this is going, keep it up! :D
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