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Eril Pt2

Ron-nasu

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not what you'd expect after 2 months i know... let this be a reminder that lineart isnt for me.. stuff happened but im doing better now so i will try to upload next update in 2 weeks !

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Sol Ish Niwa

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Eh style fluccuates. And I'm excited for the next update but don't push too hard!

If I may give a little bit of critique, I think if you make a little bit more contrast between the subject/mc in the panel and the background the page interprets/reads a lot nicer. Right now due to the colours, the whole page looks a little washed out. And if that's what you're going for that's great, there's other ways to create contrast. if it wasn't for the lineart v.s. lack thereof in the forest bg I think I'd have lost your character in the scene. Otherwise, I like where this is going, keep it up! :D

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//In the 24th century bio-science has evolved. Making AI with their own cycle of genetics possible, all originally rooting from one scientist under care-taking of the royal Poly Hannya bloodline. Self evolving bio-sciense has led to some AI taking their own turn on situations, and as a result one of the biggest AI ''mallfunctions'' came to happen at the Hannya's millitary base. Causing a long term shut-down for all IA's to stop the mallfunction from spreading. This affected more then the king of the royal family would have predicted.//

hello! this is my first try on comic making. I really want to improve and I thought the best way is to just start on something and see how it goes?
Any tips are always welcome. Thanks for having a look. (I hope to update at least once every 2 weeks on this)

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