Ch 3: Unsettling Discovery
Oct 05, 2018
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Whoa, an actual fight scene. Stay tuned next next Friday for Chapter 4: Small Confrontation
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I saw your thread on Tapas Forum and I think you are doing well so far, the perspective and anatomy are really good, but I'm missing some facial expressions, they seem quite generic like, the part where Kai is surprised (when he thinks "Ruffian?.."), his eye is the same shape and size as his normal expression. If you search for "anime facial expressions" you'll see there are variations on each expression you could adapt to your style
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