Little Step
May 01, 2015
PLEASE TELL ME ANY IMPROVEMENTS THAT COULD BE MADE, THAT WOULD BE AWESOME AND REALLY HELPFUL! Just thought I'd share this with you guys since Little Step's been getting quite a bit of attention (I never imagined so many people would be interested in it!). Some concept art for my Final Major Project exhibition.
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Think a bit more about your timing in the comic. In my opinion there are some pages that would do better as separate pages. For example if you have someone running and in the next page they're struggle. Give your panels more backgrounds. They are important to show the reader where your characters are, and where they're heading. Other then that the comic is interesting so far and I want to see where it's heading. Keep it up!
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