Part 3
Jan 08, 2019
Avery arrives at her school and we see how she doesn't seem very comfortable until she sees her friend
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Hey there! First off, I really like the colors you are using in your pages! They are complimentary and give off a good atmosphere. I also really like the character design and your style it's super cute and simplistic! As for critisism, I feel as though some of the pages seem flat and need a bit more interesting composition. Play around with camera placements and have fun! Study other comics and how they frame panels I think it could add a lot to make your pages stand out more! A comic that does this very well is mias and elle by jenny Clements! (Pay attention to camera placements and how she uses shots of characters to tell a story) I hope this helps and keep up the good work!💙
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