So here is the third chapter. Apologies for the low graphics, my scanning parted is on leave so I had to actually click photos of all the pages. The fourth chapter has a lot of action coming, so stay hooked!
I am really liking the plot so far, it shows the potential and it actually makes me curious. Just sometimes it gets a little confusing. Maybe it´s because you, as the writter, already knows the story, so you just go all out. Some parts have been hard to follow so far and still somehow it is not bad to read. Keep going, kid.
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