I swear things will start happening soon LOL just all this set up is super slow. Reminder that I'm more of a literary story teller than a visual one, so my comic pacing will probably be...not the best, I guess XD
For the most part, I think I like this page, just a few things bothering me, mostly the bird in the second panel ;; But for those who don't know "spoilers", hopefully it'll make sense on a second read through x''''D
Also funny how I've been guaranteeing forgetting at least one detail per page thus far. I wonder if I can keep that up, haha. (This time was forgetting to erase the tree bits behind the fences in panel 1. Third time, man.)
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