Ch 1- A Botched Job- Pg 16
Mar 31, 2019
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I know the last page had a lot of color on it- but this page was better served with less color. If I had pre-planned the two together a bit more than I did, I would have adjusted for that. As it was, I rewrote the script a little bit to make the transition from the previous page to the page that comes after this flow better. In the original script I wrote, this bit of dialogue doesn't happen and even though it's small, it carries their expression/emotion across to the reader better. You get a small breath at the end as I then show the door opening- and on to the next page!
What I mean, in short, was that I didn't want to end this scene too abruptly!
But look at that- I posted before monday and Isaac has cute eyes oOo ~~!
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