Sorry this isn't an update. I'm sorry if my chapters seem a little choppy. This is one of the first things i've published for people to view. I really don't have a layout for the novel. I'm just writing what I want at random. Anyway how do you think i'm doing so far? Good? Bad? You're grammar is triggering? I'm also thinking of doing a profile. Like just a page about each main character. Like eye color, hair color, hobbies, age. Things like that. Is that something you want me to do?