Just putting some faces to names.
For anyone that is interested, I'mma write a little about the story.
The story for this chapter is rather under-developed. I wrote it about 2 years ago and didn't change it much. Teresa and Marie stand out to me as especially underdeveloped characters. I hint at some past stuff relating to them (and Nikky) but never really delve into it. I think I will address this sometime in a future chapter.
Nikky was added on the fly as I was drawing up a page, then I decided she could play a role and made her have some more interaction in the story. I think I like her the most out of the characters shown so far.
Anna probably had the most development as a character. Initially the three bullies were just generic bullies. I ended up developing Anna more though and she became the primary antagonist and the leader. She has backstory and future development to go through, so we will be seeing more of her in future.
Bethany and Larrisa simply never really struck me with inspiration as characters, they are boring and bully others because they are bored. They have nothing better to do. They sadly will be appearing more in future. Perhaps I can make them more interesting...?
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