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Jun 01, 2019
So it begins. Not my favorite start but it'll do. I will do the same scrolling for the other pages.
Maxedrox
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Well, here are some contradictions, maybe because the message was delivered in the wrong way, you see when I see the characters clothing and sweat I thought for a moment they were suffering by the heat, but later they talk about the cold... I think that the sweat where too much for someone that is tired in a cold place, I would leave the facial expressions, that was enough if I wanted to show exhaustion in a cold place. I mean, the sweat can still be there, but its too much sweat.
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