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You're My Muse!

Starting from the Beginning

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This comic seems interesting, and it's very enjoyable. It's funny, the art is nice and clear, and the character's actions have given the readers alot of information of his personality already. One thing I'd suggest is adjusting the way the words are placed. The paragraphs of text is off-putting (yes, I know that's hypocritical), and the lack of character movement along side the words make it harder to read with balanced focus of the speech bubbles and the art. I found myself with all of my focus on reading the words, and looked at the picture afterward. Perhaps you could seperate parts of the text (making a train of smaller speech bubbles) and put little emotes along side the words, adding a bit of personality without having to make more panels, and also making the reading flow more naturally. Overall, I really like the comic so far. Like I said, it's hilarious and the art is great. I just wanted to let you know my thoughts and maybe help to make the comic more enjoyable. Thanks for taking the time to read, and have a nice day.

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You're My Muse!

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