Nice comic! I like the main character and the little romance subtext between her and the blonde guy, and from the synopsis there'll be more to it. School is still bland as ever, but your little touches of chaos like two different people falling in the cafetria falling make background characters actually useful. The perspective with background seems very isometric but I think you'll get better with time! Hope that's not too much unwanted feedback...
Another thing I have to sting you with is the little ad insert at the end of each Tapas episode. It breaks immersion for me, so would you consider moving them to once at the end of a chapter?
For desktop, there's also a small picture space that you can put a link into, it appears every Tapas episode so you can write it there if you want, like this: https://imgur.com/a/vuSSkdD
There's no such thing in the app though, only actual ads iirc.
Despite that, I do enjoy the comic so far! Thanks for making it.
When you’re an accidental troublemaker, life gets a lot tougher: teachers hate you, detention almost every day, nobody wants to be your friend, your brother is always pissed at you. Always rolling with the punches, LoLo just wants to get through life okay. But that might be harder than expected when her world is turned upside down…
Warning: there will be some swearing, violence, blood, and bad art
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