if it's interesting 430 can go in a few evenings. if you want general feedback i could help. for more thorough editing, a bit harder. It could be easier in pieces, like the novels posted here, so there will be more specific comments about each part
Mel is a young girl in hypersleep on an interstellar ship to colonize an Earth-like planet when she is infused by the Blight – a substance that unchecked will reset the universe. With Pong the Magus and his irritable hat Ages, Mel must fulfill a quest that will teach her how to defeat The Blight. All while only wielding a banjolele.
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